六年级摘抄好作文 作文一:《六年级好作文》900字

作文一:《六年级好作文》900字

春节

郑晶晶

盼呀盼,我日思夜想的春节终于到了。

年前,妈妈带着我们去超市买年货,有糖、饼、瓜子、零食、肉„„样样不能少,我最爱吃的是美味可口的旺仔牛奶糖,吃到嘴里有一种特别的味道,很浓,很浓,让人吃了还想吃,回味无穷的夹心巧克力和旺仔雪饼是美味中的极品,让人“流连忘返”。

吃过午饭后,大人们忙着准备丰富的大餐,小孩们贴对联,门口贴上了倒着的“福”字,可以寓意为“福到”。

团圆饭出锅啦!我们忙着摆放碗筷、酒杯和饮料、酒,美味的饭菜摆了一大桌,有“发财”谐音的生菜,美味可口的血鸭,香喷喷的牛肉„„吃都吃不完,只能留着明天吃,过年后,基本上是由扫剩饭剩菜的习俗,这就叫年年有余。

这时,烟花跳起了舞蹈,放眼望去,那礼花就像个高贵优雅的王妃,穿着美丽的衣裳,腾空而起,漆黑的天空一下子变的如同白昼,仿佛一朵美丽的菊花盛开在夜空,那星星点点的“花瓣”像仙女撒花一样,撒向人间,那红色的礼花,比朝霞还红,比玫瑰还艳,它的样子很好看,像一把大伞降落在人间。

我们有说有笑地看着绚丽多彩的烟花,(春节联欢晚会)播放了,我们津津有味地看着,大人们津津乐道的谈笑风生,

睡觉前,妈妈给我们发了红包,打开一看,吓我一大跳,从前是几十元,现在却是一百元,我们开学极了。

天气虽然寒冷,但是我们也很开心。这是多么令人兴奋的节日啊!

我爱秋天

我喜欢绿草如茵的春天,喜欢阳光灿烂的夏天,也喜欢寒风呼啸的冬天,但我更爱大丰收的秋天。

我爱秋天。白杨抖落了一身绿茵茵的衣服,静静地站在那儿,像英勇的禁卫军,伸出洁白的手臂迎接秋姑娘的洗礼,其它几棵不知名的树也跟着白杨脱掉一身绿茵茵的服装换上了一套金黄的衣裳,在幻想中,我似乎也身临其境,变成一只蝴蝶,在空中随风飘舞„„

秋姑娘的到来,驱走了夏天的炎热,迎来了一丝的凉爽,

她得到来,使叶子纷纷飘落,这时,我想起了龚自珍的“落红不是无情物,化作春泥更护花”温柔的秋姑娘伸出魔法棒把稻谷变得金灿灿的,看起来好似一片花海。秋胡娘来到了死气沉沉的果园,她把红色抹在了苹果妹妹的脸上,把黄色涂在了梨子身上,把紫色涂在了葡萄身上,这时,果园里一派生机勃勃,这都是秋姑娘的功劳啊!农场里,辣椒也被秋姑娘给抹上了红色和绿色,而美丽的白菜小姐为了保持自己的美貌让秋姑娘涂上了白色。

我爱秋天像母亲一样无私地奉献着,像老师,无私地化作一盏明灯点亮我们的生活。

作文二:《六年级英语好作文_0》25700字

六年级英语作文范文

英语作文已经是小学英语会考的必考题目,主要是针对每

个单元的话题写话题作文,一般是10分。这道题也是学生

对所学英语知识的综合运用,重点是平时积累的句型和词

汇。如果重点句型和词汇掌握的好,写作也不是什么难题。

1、看图写作文。(园地29页)

题目:A Happy Day in Spring

提示:Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场

景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的

想象和发挥。

要求:1、条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点

正确,书写工整、规范。

2、不少于70个单词。

A Happy Day in Spring

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes

flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.

3、根据下面提供的内容,写一篇英语短文。要求语句通

顺,条理清楚,字数不少于50个单词。

Mary 是个英国女孩,五年级学生,十二岁。她向别人自

我介绍,并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐,爸爸是医生,

妈妈是老师,她非常爱他们,他们也很爱她。

My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

4、题目: My net friend(我的网友)

要求:1。条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,

书写清晰、规范;

2(要将提示词全部体现在作文中;不得少于50个单词。

提示词:(1)computer (2)net friend  (3) talk with each

other(互相交谈)(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) (5)talk in

English (用英语交谈) (6)good now

My net friend

I am Tony. I have a computer. I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?

5、提示:根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片,以“我

的好朋友”为题,写一篇小短文,介绍Ann的基本情况。

要求:1、条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,

书写清晰、规范。

2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。

3、不少于60个单词。

My good friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!

6、短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求,写一篇65个单

词左右的英语短文。  要求:1、写一封介绍你一家的电子

邮件给Jay

Hello, Jay,

I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?

Bye- bye,

XXXX

7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西,请根据下表的信息,写一

篇不少于60个单词的小作文。

Happy Shop:Some pieces of candy ,4  A roll of toilet

paper ,5

Mr. Chen’s Store:A carton of ice cream,15

Uncle Eddy’s Store:A bottle of shampoo,45  A pair of

socks,8

Big Blue Department Store:A bag of chips ,9  Toy car

,105

Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping

with his mother.

Yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at . They bought a toy car. It’s 105 Yuan.

They were very happy.

8、假设你是May, 请用不少于60个单词来向你的笔友Jay

介绍你的家庭情况,请在文中使用3个最高级和2个比较级。

Hi, Jay,

I’m very happy to be your pen-friends. I have a warm family. There are four

years older than my sister. My sister is the youngest in my family. I love my family.  What about you?

Bye-bye.

9、根据提示,从表格中获取信息写一篇不少于60个单词

的小作文,要求提示的内容要全部体现在作文中。

My Friends

I have two good friends. They’re Zhang Ping and Jim.

Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. He’s 15.

Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. He’s 60 kilograms. Jim is

taller than her. He’s 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I

like them very much.

10、描写你的周末生活,注意用一般现在时。

My Weekend

I have happy weekend.

On Saturday morning I always have English classes at school. I  study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.

So I love weekends.

11、昨天是3月20日,也是你的生日,请描写你的生日

派对,注意用一般过去

时。

My birthday

Yesterday was March 20th. It was my birthday. I had a party. I ate too much. Mike brought a carton of ice cream. Jenny brought some candy. Mary brought a lot of cookies. My mom made a cake. My dad bought a toy car for me. I was very happy. At the party we sang and danced. We had a good time.

12、写一个你最喜爱的人,请对他/她进行一定的外貌描

写。

My Favorite People

Who is your favorite person? My favorite person is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.

13、请描写一下你的房间,注意要使用“there be ”句型。

My Bedroom

I have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chairs. I also have a big and tall closet because I have many clothes. There is a big desk next to the window. I always do my homework at the desk. There is a family photo on the wall. We took this photo this summer holiday. I like my bedroom.

14、请以你所在的学校“育英小学”描写你的学校。

My School

I study at Yuying Primary School. My school is very big and beautiful. There are three buildings and a playground. There are many trees and flowers. My classroom is very big and bright. There are 60 students in it. They study hard and

always help with each other. Our teachers are very nice and smart. I like my school.

I have a good friend. We are in the same class. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis, soccer and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.

16、请写一个你最喜爱的季节,要写出你喜欢的原因。

My favorite season

My favorite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There

is a summer vacation in summer. I don’t go to school. I

think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation.

17、描写一种你最喜爱的动物,要对它进行外形描写。

My Favorite Animal

My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s very small. It’s white.  It has a short tail. It

has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes

jumping three times a day. I like it very much. It’s lovely.

It’s my best friend. I like the rabbit.

18、同学们,你一定有很多的爱好,请你写一个你的爱

好,字数不少于60个单词。

My hobby

My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮). There are many

stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.

19、寒假很快就要到了,请你为你的寒假写一个计划。

快点把你的计划写出来吧~

My Winter Holiday

It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I and tasty. In the winter holiday, I

20、假设Jack 是10岁,短发,1.5m, 50kg; 而May 是12

岁,长发,1.6m,45kg。请运用学过的句型介绍和比较一下他们

的特征。

Jack and May

I have two good friends. They are Jack and May. He is ten. He has short hair. He is 50kg now. And May is a beautiful

girl. She has long hair. She is two years older than Jack. She

is 12 now. She is taller than Jack. She is 1.6m. But Jack is

heavier than May. May is 45kg. They are lovely students. I

like them.

篇二:新版六年级英语上册作文题

小小习作园

1、假如你叫明明,你邀请你的朋友天天今天下午到你家来参加聚会。请根据下列提示给天天写一封电子邮件,告诉他如何来你家。 提示:在我们学校前面的公共汽车站乘8路公共汽车,在邮局处下车,然后直走5分钟,在十字路口向右转。你在左边会看见一家书店,我家就挨着书店。

2、你在日常生活中是怎样遵守交通规则的,你能写一写吗,你可以用到以下短语:go to school,by bike/bus,on foot,traffic rules,red/green/yellow light…

要求:1. 语言流畅,字迹工整。  2. 50个单词左右。

3.下面是Tom的周末计划表,请读一读,并写一写他在这个周末都打算做些什么。

4.周末到了,同学们都 有出去游玩的计划,读表格,将大家的计划写出来。

5.你的爱好是什么,请以“My hobbies”为题写一篇短文,介绍你的爱好。 要求:1. 语言流畅,字迹工整。  2. 50个单词左右。

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6.你一定很爱你的家人吧,请以“I love family”为题写一篇

习作,要求描述一家人的职业和爱好,还可以自由拓展一些

其他的内容,表达 “我爱我家”的情感。50个词左右。

7.同学们,在我们的生活中,生病是难免的。假如你今

天感冒了,感觉不舒服,你的感受是怎样的呢,请以“A bad

cold”为题写一篇作文,描述你感冒时的感受,50个词左右。

8.你一定有许多好朋友,你了解他们吗,请选择一位好

朋友,写一写他或她的爱好 、家族成员以及日常生活。要

求书写工整,50个词左右。

1、Dear  Tian tian,

Please come to my home this afternoon. Now let me tell you how to get to my home.  First, take the No.8 bus in front of our school. Get off at the post office. Then go straight for five minutes, and turn right at the crossing. You’

ll see a bookstore on your left. My home is next to the bookstore. Yours,

Ming ming

2.I usually go to school by bike. I know the traffic rules very well. There are three traffic lights in our country: red ,yellow and green. Red light means “Stop”. Yellow light means “Wait”. Green light means “Go”. We must go on the right side of the road. I always obey the traffic rules .And

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you?

3.The weekend is coming. Tom has many plans. He is going to play sports and read a book on Saturday morning. On Saturday afternoon , he is going to the supermarket with his mother. On Sunday morning , he is going to do his homework .And on Sunday afternoon, he is going to the park with his friends. He will have a happy weekend.

4.The weekend is coming. Mike is going to the park. He will go there on foot, because it is near his home. John is going to the museum. He is going there by subway, because it’s fast. David is going to the beach. He is going there by car, because the beach is far from his home.

5. My hobbies

My name is Ann. I am 12.I am a student. I like collecting stamps. It’s very interesting. I also like drawing pictures. I draw pictures every day. And I like reading very much. I usually read books at night. What are your hobbies? Can you tell me, please ?

6. I love my family

There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father is a coach. He works in a gym. He likes doing sports. He goes to work by bike. My mother is

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a worker .She works in a factory. She goes to work by bus. She likes cooking Chinese food. I’m a student. I go to school

on foot. I like reading and singing. We often go to the park on the weekend, sometimes we climb mountains. We are happy every day. I love my family. What about you? Tell me, please .

7. A bad cold

I don’t feel well today. I’m ill. I think I have a cold. I am

sad. I can go out to play. My mother is worried. She takes me to the hospital. I should see a doctor. The doctor says I should wear warm clothes and take some medicine. I should do more exercise and drink

more hot water. And then I’ll get better soon.

8.

My name is Sarah. I have a good friend. She is Amy. We are in the same class. We often play together after class. Amy likes dancing and reading stories. She goes to school by bike. She studies very hard. In the evening, she reads books at home. She goes to bed at

9.Amy’s mother is a factory worker. She goes to work by subway.  She likes watching TV. Her father is a

businessman. He goes to work by

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car.  He likes doing sports. They are happy every day.

篇三:六年级英语上册作文汇集

六年级作文汇集

一、介绍你和家人上学或上班的方式

I go to school on foot.My sister goes to school on foot,too.  My brother goes to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work by bike.

二、介绍你和朋友各自上学的方式。

I go to school by bus. My friend Amy goes to school on foot. John goes to school by bike. Mike goes to school by Subway. Sarah goes to school by bus.

三、看图,说说你怎样去电影院

Go straight for one

四、读读下周末你和朋友的计划

have a busy weekend with my friends. On Saturday go shpping. On Saturday afternoon, On Sunday morning,We are going to go fishing. On Sunday afternoon,we are going to climb mountains. We will be happy.

五、说说这个星期天,你和家人的安排。

to clean the room for them.

六、说说你和你家人的爱好。

I like flying kites.  My father likes diving. My mother

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likes playing the violin. My brother likes riding a bike. My sister likes listening to music.

七、介绍你和你朋友的爱好。

kites.

八、介绍你一家人的职业和上班地点和方式。

My father is a teacher. He works in a school. He goes to work by car. My mother is an accountant. She works in a bank. She goes to work by bus.

九、写一封信给你的笔友,介绍你一家人的情况。

Dear Amy,

is 39. She’s short and thin. She likes cooking.She is a salesperson. She works in a bookstore. She goes towork on foot.

Yours,

Sarah

十、看图介绍图中这个人的情况。

He is Ben. He is 26.He is a policeman. He goes to work by bus. He likes playing the violin. He likes going fishing ,too.

十一、看图,写作。

The sun shines and the water becomes vapour.  The cloud comes from the vapour. The rain comes from the clouds. The water in the river comes from the rain. This is

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the rain cycles.

十二、看图,写种花的过程。

First, dig the soil. Then put the seeds in the soil.  Put it in the sun. Water it often. We can see the sprout. Then wait for a flower to grow.

十三、看图,以plant a corn为题,写一篇短文

First, dig the soil and put some seeds in the soil. Water them. We can see a sprout. We can see a big plant. And then we can see the corn.

十四、介绍你是如何种树的。

I can plant trees. First ,dig the soil. Then put the plant in the soil. Water it. Wait for it to grow.

十五、根据提示写一篇短文

He is John. He is 12. He likes collecting stamps. He gets up at 6:40 in the morning. He goes to school at 7:30.  He reads books at 8:00 in the evening.

篇四:小学六年级英语作文汇总

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is

tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing

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and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是”我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作

文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓

名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课

特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],

以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、

标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock

every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,

而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所

为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。小朋友

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们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结

合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three,

Grade Five. I’m very helpful at home. I can water the

flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自

己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能

做的家务,很详细,到位。

小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样

会避免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象

才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

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【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村

庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感

觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下

自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词

或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动,记叙了

周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感

受。即:周六上午:舞蹈课?下午:做作业和帮妈妈做清洁

?周日上午:看望祖父母?下午:阅读?晚上:看电视,与

父母交流?感受:高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日

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中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么地方

由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动

内容写清楚,最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态:这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时

(主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的);b.一般现在时(主要

描述你经常怎样度过周末);c.一般将来时(主要描述你要怎

样过周末)。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的,所以采

用一般现在时来写。

注意:活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识,eg.(例)起

床get up,和新知识,eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un

很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句,eg. “I often watch

TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents

watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and windy, I can fly kites when it’s windy. And I can go hiking

with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking.

Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I

often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can

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watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white.

We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski.

And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring

Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇短文是描述“我的四季”,在写法上,是根据春、

夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的,先讲明每个季节的特征,之

后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同

时讲一些自己的真实感受,最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在

实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主

要的活动内容,之后再去讲其他几个季节,还可以多讲解一

下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色,如:秋天的田地

里一片金黄,农民在收割等等,这样写出来的四季更贴近实

际。

时态:这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”,是比较惯常的一些行

为,所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写

法。即:在什么季节,天气如何,我们可以做什么。

注意:在写作内容上,不可以像以往的内容那么简单,因

为有四个季节,所以要写明季节,季节天气,季节性活动,

活动的人,活动的感受等,要求句子顺序要正确,在写作中

还要注意关联词的使用,如用了“因为”,就不能用“所以”,

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二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

My family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员,以及此刻他们

正在干什么,表达了自己对家人的感情。

时态:由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态,所以建议采

用现在进行时态。

句型:主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意:本单元的重点是现在进行时态,注意在写句子时要

保持时态的完整性,即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

A Field Trip

It is a nice day. Our class  will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.

Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy

is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh,

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who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never

forget this field trip.

【要领点评】

写法:这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的,记叙了同

学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。

时态:这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由

于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时,所以,这里我们采用现在

进行时比较合适。

句型:××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re

doing sth.

注意:活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意

时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。

PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

Li Ying ’S Hobby

Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes

drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies

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make her happy.

【要领点评】

这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,

他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多

种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱

好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下

手:一是具体地描绘;二是和上面小朋友一样,粗线条地勾

画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些

转述的话,可以使作文更有灵气,避免了平铺直叙的缺点。

比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she

says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子,使

读者眼前为之一亮。

Don’t be against the traffic rules

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the

road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】

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这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”,小作者没有说一

些空话,而是从自己的经历写起,叙述自己以什么方式去上

学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大,那样很容易使文章显得

空洞,而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大

小写、句子的标点符号等。

I Love My Family

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s

now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.

I love my family.

【要领点评】

一个平凡的题材,一篇生动的作文。这样的命题,我们可

能面对几次,甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧,

了了数言,让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上,很值得我们去思考,

我们能做到吗,

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外,在结构上也有闪光

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之处。先总说,将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍,后分说,把家

人的工作、上班方式,爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概

括,起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也

可以借鉴呢,

How to get to the science museum

We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?

The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’

t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right .

Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇

好作文呢,通过你的叙述,能让别人很容易找到博物馆,这

应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢,首先他

写了去博物馆的位置,最后浓墨重彩,指明从学校去博物馆

的具体路线,这条路线够清晰吧~

小朋友们在写这类作文的时候,总有些无从下手的感觉,

不知从何说起。其实介绍路线,无非就是告诉他人某段路的

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起点和终点,还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清

楚,你自己首先得清楚,然后再通过自己的叙述,将路线清

清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方,如

在哪儿转弯,向哪儿转,经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的

标志建筑等。这样,你就能说清,别人也能弄明白。

Let’s have a nice day

It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with

my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and

vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.

【要领点评】

怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”,有两点不能忘记,一是安

排得充实,二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了,

上午去书店看书买书,中午在饭店吃饭,下午去颐和园玩耍、

划船,丰富多彩~文章以时间为线索,叙述清楚,文笔也很

优美。

小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时,要尽量给读者交代好时

间、地点、人物和活动等,使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过

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去发生的事情,还是现在正在做的事情,或计划、打算要做

的事情,以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情,那么就

要注意在表述时多用

“be  going  to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要,

那就是故事的线索要交代好,让读者在阅读时对整个过程一

目了然。

PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My friend and I

I have a good friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12

years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall.

I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’

m 41 kg. He’s heavier. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we

篇五:六年级英语小作文

一、请选用所给的动词词组和介词短语,介绍你和家人的

出行情况。六年级上册英语作文

visit my grandparents 动词词组:go to school, go to

work, go shopping, take a trip, train; by plane

介词短语: by bike; by car; by bus; on foot; by subway; by

要求:1.  2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,时态正确,书写工整、

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规范;不少于5句话。

and There are three people in my family, my father,my mother

doctor. He goes to work by car. My mother often goes shopping I. I’m a student. I go to

school on foot. My father is a by bus. Sometimes we take a trip by train. On the weekend, we visit my grandparents by bus.

二、周末你打算干什么,写出自己的周末计划。

要求:1. 条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,

书写工整、规范 ;  2. 体现提示的信息,适当发挥想象:  3.

不少于5句话。 a film on Saturday morning. I’m going to

play football with my  Im Mike. Im going to have a busy weekend. I’m going to seeMy weekend plan

friends on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, I’m

going to  visit my grandparents. And I’m going to do my

homework in the afternoon. In the evening , I am going to watch TVhappy! . I’m busy but

三、陈洁周日在家举行生日聚会,她邀请Sarah前来,可

是Sarah不知道去她家的路,你帮陈洁写上路线,补全生日

邀请卡吧。 陈洁家路线提示:1.2.

学博物馆后面。 Sarah在第二个十字路口向右转,你会

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看见科学博物馆,陈洁家就在科家挨着学校,首先从学校向

左转,然后直着走。

要求: Dear Sarah,1. 2. 条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通

顺,标点正确,书写规范。不少于5句话。  Please come to

my birthday party on Sunday morning. Now let

me tell you the way to my house. Turn left at the school. And then go straight. Turn right at the second crossing. You can see the science museum. My home is behind it.

四、假如你是Mike,以“My family”为题,写一篇短文,

介绍你家人的职业、工作地点和出行方式。

father, my mother and I. My father is a coach. He works in a I’m Mike. There are three people in my family. They are my gym. works in a university. She goes to work by car. I am a student. I He goes to work by bike. My mother is a scientist. She go to school on foot. I have a happy family.

五、以“My hobbies”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你的爱好,

以便你与笔友加深了解。

提示:do word puzzles; read stories, sing and dance; go hiking...  I like...  I don’t like...MyWhat...? very Hi,I’m

Sarah. I’m twelve years old. I like doing word puzzles hobbies

like  much. It’s interesting. I like reading stories, but I

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don’t singing and dancing. I sing and dance every day. And I like going watching TV. I read stories in the evening. I also like hiking very much. I’m going hiking with my father next

weekend. What are your hobbies?

六、这个周末我和父母打算去远足,我很开心。但是这周

末学校要组织我们去参观博物馆。不能和父母去远足了,我

感到很难过。放学后,我把这件事告诉了妈妈。妈妈说我们

下周再去远足,我又高兴起来了。

提示词:sad, after school, next weekend, again

go hiking, this weekend, happy, say, visit the museum, Im Im Sarah. Im going hiking with my parents this weekend. classmates this weekend. Im so sad. After school I tell it to so happy. But I have to visit the museum with my my happy again.

mother. She says we can go hiking next weekend. I feel

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