英语记叙文续写 作文一:《英语记叙文》2300字

作文一:《英语记叙文》2300字

A Brave Girl in the Earthquake

May 12th is an ordinary day in 2008, it is in this day that shocking earthquake happened in Sichuan province, China.The earthquake destroyed nearly everything in Wenchan county Sichuan province.People suffered great loss in their lives and properties. Most buildings were razed in worst-hit areas with so many people, including school students, buried underneath the ruins.

I learned over the radio and in the television that a senior school student- He cuiqing- her moving story in qingchuan highschool. Having escaped from the quake, she returned to the dormitories to save the schoolmates from the ruins. But at last her right leg was deeply pressed by the cement board.

He cuiqing is a junior school student in Grade one. When the earthquake happened, she and her classmates were taking a nap. There are 19 students in her dormitory in the usual time, while in that day several students just went out. "When the ground is shaking, I have got up and went out of the domitory, coming to the corridor. After realizing the happenings of the earthquake, I start running to escape the disaster within the enough time. Suddenly I think of the sleeping classmates in the dormitory, then I come back to the dormitory to call them without hesitation " he cuiqing recalled, "at the beginning of the quake, some students think maybe someone is making a joke, but since I shouted at

them that the earthquake is taking place now, they hurriedly get up and run out of the room."

At the same time, the domitory began to collapse. While the 10 classmates managed to run out of the building, unfortunately He cuiqing and other four students were pressed under the ground. With the time passing by, the teachers, classmates and rescuers were looking for them with difficulty. When the rescuers found Miss he, she had been pressed by the stone for nearly 50 hours, losing the consciousness.

In Miss He's mind, she believed that the rescuers would save them from the disaster, so she encouraged the classmates and herself to live bravely. When she saw the rescuers, she was optimistic to say, "uncle, I

am still living."

After she had an operation surgery in the leg, she said:"I do not regret returning to the dormitory to save the classmates, but I just regret that I can not save more students ."

作文二:《英语记叙文》3100字

记叙文_英语题库

要点概述:

记叙文是以记人、叙事、写景、状物为主要内容,以记叙、描写为主要表达方式的一种文体,通常分为三类:

1. 以人物为主的记叙文,即以人物为中心组织材料,围绕这个人物来写一件事或两件事。

2. 以事件为主的记叙文。即以事件为中心组织材料,围绕中心事件,可以写一个人或几个人。

3. 以写景状物为主的记叙文,应注意的是,在一篇记叙文中,写人、写景、写事往往是交织在一起的,不可截然分开,但各有侧重。

写记叙文通常应遵循以下几点:

1 . 交待要素,即人、时、地、事。

2. 按事件发生的先后顺序叙述,做到完整具体。

3. 重点突出,目的明确,不要玩弄词藻,讲清言明即可。

写作时还要注意,用第一人称时主要是本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事;用第三人称时则主要是他人的经历和事情。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事,所以原则上通常都用过去时态写,但有时也用历史现在时和戏剧现在时。

名题剖示 1

下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请根据此图为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。

注意: 1 . 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;

2. 叙述必须用第一人称;

3. 词数 100 左右。

生词:违章者 offender n. 十字路口 crossroad(s) n.

分析:本文要求考生用记叙文的方式叙述自己和哥哥在看电影的路上违章被罚的经过。

首先要仔细观察图,读懂题意,然后依图编拟提纲。

内容要点:

1. 哥哥骑车带我去电影院

go to the cinema by bicycle

2. 在十字路口被两人拦住

come to the crossroads / at the crossroads, stop

3. 半小时前他们因骑车带人被警察拦住

be stopped by a policeman, half an hour ago

4. 警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者

made them catch the next offender

5. 于是我们照样被罚,接他们的班

stand, wait to catch another offender

例题分析:

这是一篇记实的记叙文,叙述的是我和哥哥骑车受罚的经历。文章简短、流畅,有两处使用了直接引语,使短文显得生动。

在动笔之前,考生应明确题目要求,因为是“你的一段亲身经历”,所以必须使用第一人称。考生应认真审题,把握图中人物关系及图中的提示语。因为故事发生在过去,所以短文的时态应以过去时为主。

范文中在写作顺序上采用了插叙的手法,增强了短文的感染力。文章的关联词和过渡语使用得体。如: the other day, As we came to„„ , but „„ , So„„ .

范文中使用了较复杂的句子结构,如:

( 1 )现在分词作伴随状语:① with me sitting on the seat behind ② Pointing to a policeman „„

( 2 ) make 接不定式的复合结构: „„and made us catch„„

( 3 )条件状语从句: „„as long as we did

参考范文

The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “ We ' v(转载自中国教育文摘http://www.edUzhai.net,请保留此标记。)e found you at long last, ” they said, but we didn ' t know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “ He stopped us about an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you don ' t have to wait as long as we did. Good luck. ”

名题剖示 2

《英语辅导报》高三版正在征集以 My Grandmother 为题的文章。请根据下列要求,写一篇介绍奶奶的记叙文,以便向该报投稿。

1. 70 岁,头发花白;

2. 和蔼、善良、乐于助人,邻里关系融洽;

3. 身体健康,生活简朴;

4. 喜欢看电视,对《对话》,京剧( Beijing Opera )感兴趣;

5. 教育我以诚待人,做有用人才。

注意:

1. 词数: 100 左右;

2. 可适当增加要点,使短文连贯。

内容要点:

根据短文提示,可以提炼出以下要点:

1. gray hair;

2 . lead a simple life;

3. be ready to help„„

4. get on well with;

5. enjoys watching/ show interest in„„

6. told me to be honest„„ .

因为奶奶如此善良,所以“她受人尊敬”,“我爱我奶奶”,这些语言尽管没有明确提示,但应是短文必不可少的要点。

例题分析:

本文要求考生写一篇记叙文。首先考生应根据提示,确定全文的时态,用一般现在时,并注意人称的使用,因为题为“ My Grandmother ”,所以应使用第一人称。由于这是一种指导性写作,考生应紧扣所给提示,不能根据实际生活中的“奶奶”随意发挥。

作者重视了人物形象的描写,把一个慈祥、乐于助人、受人爱戴的奶奶展现在读者面前。尽管年事已高,但“奶奶”也有自己感兴趣的事情。文中较好地使用了较复杂的句子结构,像定语从句,使用了较多的连接词,文章衔接自然,层次分明。

参考范文:

My Grandmother

My grandmother is seventy years of age who has a head of gray hair. My grandmother get along well with her neighbours. She is a kind-hearted person and is always ready to help others, so whenever people get into difficulties, they often go to her for help. She is respected by all her neighbours.

My gradmother enjoys watching Beijing Opera on TV and she shows much interest in the Dialogue of CCTV. She leads a simple but happy life.

She often tells me to be honest. She expects me to work hard at my lessons and be a useful person to the society in the future. I love my granny very much.

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